Claire Gardien (France)
Haiku, poem of a brief instant of nature life and the emotion
felt at the precise moment it happened. A three lines’prose of
5/7/5 syllables. The third line is either opposed to the text or
David Terelinck (Guildford, NSW)
Haiku is a journey along a road lined with small windows. Each
time we pause to peer into one of these, we are astounded by the
beauty and depth of the vista behind them.
Julie Simpson (Millford, NSW)
Sometimes a simple, stunning mental snapshot, sometimes as
boring as a slideshow at the neighbours.
Luong Son Truong (Khanh Hoa, Vietnam)
When sounds are used to echo immortal silence a haiku is
Matt Hetherington (Melbourne, Vic)
a poem of a poetic moment
written as briefly as possible
in the present tense
if regarding nature, its haiku
if human nature, it’s senryu
The response to this exercise has been wonderful but it is time
to wind it up no more submissions, please. I will later attempt a
collage to summarise what we have shared.
John Bird, for the AHS Definitions Project.